ये तो न सोचा था- भाग 2

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नोट - अगर आप ने इस कहानी के आगे के भाग नहीं पढ़े है तो नीचे दिए गए लिंक पर जाकर पढ़ सकते है



भाग-1: ये तो न सोचा था?



भाग-2: ये तो न सोचा था?



अंकित- पर एक मिनट सुनिये तो।

प्रियल- मिस्टर अंकित, मैंने आपसे कहा न कि मैं यहाँ पर किसी महेंद्र नाम के व्यक्ति को नहीं जानती हूँ। पर मैं आप जैसे लड़कों को अच्छी तरह से जानती हूँ। मौका मिलते ही लड़कियों से बात करने के बहाने ढूँढने लगते हैं। पर आप मुझे ऐसी वैसी लड़की समझने की गलती न करें तो ही बेहतर रहेगा।

अंकित- ओ हेलो! मिस झांसी की रानी। मुझे भी कोई शौक नहीं है तुम्हारे जैसी नकचढ़ी लड़की के मुँह लगने का। वो तो मैंने तुम्हारे बटुए में सुभद्रा आंटी की फोटो देखी तो पूछ लिया और मैंने ऐसा भी क्या कह दिया कि आप मुझे कैरेक्टर सर्टिफ़िकेट देने लगी।

(अब प्रियल को भी लगा कि शायद वो कुछ ज्यादा ही बोल गयी। पर अभी ज्यादा कुछ कहने का समय नहीं था)

प्रियल- ओके सॉरी, मुझे आपको ऐसे नहीं बोलना चाहिए था। अब आप जाईये अपने रास्ते और मुझे मेरे काम से जाने दीजिये। इतना कहकर प्रियल अंकित को कुछ बोलने का मौका दिए बिना ही रिसेप्शन की ओर भागी जहाँ उसे अपनी ज्वाइनिंग की औपचारिकता पूर्ण करनी थी।

इधर अंकित पर 5 मिनट की मुलाकात में ही प्रियल का जादू चढ़ गया था। आखिर इन 5 मिनट में वो इतना तो समझ ही गया था कि वो एक शरीफ लड़की है जो फ्लर्ट करने वाले लड़कों को कोई भाव नहीं देती।
तो ज़नाब सर खुजाते हुए खुद में ही बुदबुदाये- 'अजी, अब तो अपना भी रास्ता वही से जायेगा जहाँ से आपका।'

वही कुछ ही दूर खड़ा उसका दोस्त निखिल (जो कि इस हॉस्पिटल के ट्रस्टी मिस्टर महेंद्र प्रताप जी का बेटा है) उसकी हरकतें देख रहा था तो प्रियल के जाते ही उसके पास आकर बोला- 'अबे ओये, ये क्या हो रहा है? जब डॉक्टर रश्मि और नीलम तुझसे बात करना चाहती हैं तो तू उन्हें कोई भाव ही नहीं देता जबकि दोनों ही तेरी हाँ का इंतज़ार कर रही है और ज़नाब जिसे जानते तक नहीं है उसके बारे में सोच-सोच कर मन ही मन मुस्कुराये जा रहे हैं।'

अंकित- अबे, ऐसा कुछ भी नहीं है। मैं तो उसे जानता तक नहीं और, डॉक्टर नीलम और डॉक्टर रश्मि को तो मैंने कभी उस नज़र से देखा ही नहीं।

निखिल- वो तो मैं भी जानता हूँ और तुझे भी अच्छे से जानता हूँ। जब वो तुझसे टकराई थी तभी से देख रहा हूँ तेरी आँखों को और अब तो तेरे गाल भी ब्लश कर रहे हैं।


अंकित थोड़ा और शर्मा जाता है और निखिल के गले लग जाता है।

अंकित- चल अब इस बात को छोड़ और यार तूने कभी बताया नहीं की तेरी कोई बहन भी है?

निखिल (हैरानी से): यार ज़रूर बता देता अगर कोई बहन होती तो। मतलब मेरी कोई सगी बहन है ही नहीं।

अंकित- पर मैंने उस लड़की के बटुए में सुभद्रा आंटी की फोटो देखी है उसके साथ और जहाँ तक मैं जानता हूँ तुम तो महेंद्र अंकल और सुभद्रा आंटी के बेटे हो न?

निखिल (और हैरान होते हुए)- यार मैंने भी माँ की केवल तस्वीर ही देखी है और इसके सिवा उनके बारे में कुछ नहीं जानता।

अंकित- मतलब??

निखिल- मतलब ये है कि महेंद्र बाबू जी ने मुझ जैसे अनाथ को अपनी औलाद से भी बढ़कर प्यार दिया है और बहुत कम लोगों को ही पता है कि मैं उनकी स्वयं की औलाद नहीं हूँ।

अंकित (हैरान होते हुए)- पर तुम्हें और अंकल जो को कभी देखकर ऐसा लगा ही नहीं। फिर कुछ सोचते हुए....तो फिर सुभद्रा आंटी कहाँ हैं?

निखिल- मैं नहीं जानता यार। बस ये जानता हूँ कि बाबूजी उन्हें अब भी बहुत प्रेम करते हैं और कभी- कभी अकेले कमरे में उनकी तस्वीर से बात करते हैं। थोड़ा बहुत दादीजी से सुना था कि माँ उनसे किसी बात पर नाराज़ होकर घर छोड़कर चली गयी थी पर इससे ज्यादा मुझे कुछ नहीं पता।

और तुम जानते हो बाबूजी ने ये अस्पताल भी उन्हीं कि याद में बनवाया है और इस अस्पताल में अगर बेटी का जन्म होता है तो उसका कोई चिकित्सा शुल्क नहीं लिया जाता है। अस्पताल के अच्छे कार्यों को देखे हुए 5 वर्ष पूर्व ही इसे सरकारी चिकित्सालय की मान्यता दे दी गयी। इसके अलावा वो हवेली जहाँ माँ-बाबूजी पहले रहते थे उसे भी बाबूजी ने बालिका विद्यालय में परिवर्तित कर दिया है। जहाँ लड़कियों को प्राइमरी शिक्षा निःशुल्क दी जाती है।

अंकित- कहीं वो लड़की, महेंद्र अंकल कि बेटी तो नहीं है?



"ईद-उल-फितर के इस खूबसूरत और मुबारक दिन पर, मेधज न्यूज़ की तरफ से आपको और आपके परिवार को  ईद मुबारक हो!"



(आगे की कहानी अगले भाग में... पढ़ते रहें मेधज न्यूज़!!)



आशा है आपको अब तक की कहानी अच्छी लगी होगी, अगले भाग के लिए कमेंट बॉक्स में अपनी समीक्षा/ प्रतिक्रिया अवश्य दें...।​



[ इस कहानी का अगला भाग पढ़ने के लिए यहाँ क्लिक करें- भाग-3: ये तो न सोचा था ]



----(भावना मौर्य)----


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      25-05-2020 20:09:36

    • Bahut badhiya, dil ko chune wali story...

      Commented by :Ashish Kumar
      25-05-2020 20:07:25

    • Nice

      Commented by :Ajay kumar
      25-05-2020 19:40:19

    • Nice story

      Commented by :LAL KRISHNA LAL
      25-05-2020 19:35:26

    • nice story

      Commented by :shubham kumar
      25-05-2020 19:29:49

    • Nice

      Commented by :Ravindra Kumar
      25-05-2020 19:27:43

    • Interesting story

      Commented by :Prabhat
      25-05-2020 19:19:03

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Avinash Kumar
      25-05-2020 19:04:12

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Ashish kumar nainital
      25-05-2020 18:59:58

    • Nice

      Commented by :Shreya
      25-05-2020 18:55:13

    • Superb

      Commented by :Sandeep kumar yadav
      25-05-2020 18:53:44

    • Nice Awesome

      Commented by :Dheerendra Singh Rajawat
      25-05-2020 18:50:25

    • Good story

      Commented by :Anant Singh
      25-05-2020 18:49:13

    • Super

      Commented by :Vikalp Gupta
      25-05-2020 18:46:43

    • Nice one

      Commented by :Raghunath Patra
      25-05-2020 18:41:10

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Vijay Ray AITM
      25-05-2020 18:36:46

    • very nice lines

      Commented by :abhiyant kumar singh
      25-05-2020 18:35:26

    • Nice

      Commented by :Parmatma
      25-05-2020 18:31:18

    • Nice

      Commented by :Atul Kumar Singh
      25-05-2020 18:22:12

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Vaishali shukla
      25-05-2020 18:18:50

    • Nice

      Commented by :Sirajuddin Ansari
      25-05-2020 18:18:31

    • Gajab ka kahani he ... Nice

      Commented by :Manoja Kumar Pradhan
      25-05-2020 18:10:50

    • बहुत बढ़िया

      Commented by :Harendra Singh
      25-05-2020 18:07:20

    • Nice & beautiful story

      Commented by :Dharmendra Chauhan
      25-05-2020 18:07:11

    • Next episode send

      Commented by :Uttam kumar Singh
      25-05-2020 18:02:04

    • Very nice story ..

      Commented by :Ajeet Singh
      25-05-2020 17:58:48

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Shailesh Kumar Gaund
      25-05-2020 17:56:36

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Nandan Kumar Gupta
      25-05-2020 17:49:30

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Mithun Kumar
      25-05-2020 17:49:05

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Amit Kumar
      25-05-2020 17:48:37

    • Emotional story

      Commented by :Shambhu Kumar
      25-05-2020 17:48:09

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Mitthu
      25-05-2020 17:48:01

    • Next part

      Commented by :Anirudh Kumar
      25-05-2020 17:47:53

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Ravi Roshan
      25-05-2020 17:47:30

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Tarandeep Kaur
      25-05-2020 17:45:29

    • Awesome story

      Commented by :Harshita Srivastava
      25-05-2020 17:43:15

    • Story very interesting

      Commented by :Pawan Gupta
      25-05-2020 17:42:32

    • Nice story

      Commented by :LAL KRISHNA LAL
      25-05-2020 17:38:14

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Taushif Danish
      25-05-2020 17:34:14

    • Commented by :Rajesh Singh
      25-05-2020 17:32:38

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Aditya Yadav Haridwar Uttarakhand
      25-05-2020 17:32:25

    • Nice Story

      Commented by :ABHISHEK DARBHNAGA CIRCLE
      25-05-2020 17:30:10

    • Good

      Commented by :Sumit kumar
      25-05-2020 17:29:39

    • Lovely story

      Commented by :Baliram shaw
      25-05-2020 17:29:01

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Mithun Kumar
      25-05-2020 17:25:05

    • Nice

      Commented by :Kamlesh Singh
      25-05-2020 17:24:55

    • Ati sunder

      Commented by :Sushil Kumar Gautam
      25-05-2020 17:24:54

    • Nice

      Commented by :Amit Kumar
      25-05-2020 17:24:02

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Rakesh Roy
      25-05-2020 17:23:46

    • Nice

      Commented by :Nandan Kumar Gupta
      25-05-2020 17:23:29

    • Very nice

      Commented by :Mitthu
      25-05-2020 17:22:58

    • Nice

      Commented by :Ravi Roshan Paswan
      25-05-2020 17:22:18

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Raviranjan kr Singh
      25-05-2020 17:22:08

    • Ab wait nahi ho raha

      Commented by :Prince Kumar
      25-05-2020 17:20:35

    • Nice. Part 3rd Ka intejar

      Commented by :Sateesh Singh
      25-05-2020 17:17:22

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Rahul Kumar
      25-05-2020 17:17:21

    • Nice

      Commented by :Tapan Kumar mahakud 29 4
      25-05-2020 17:11:54

    • Nice line

      Commented by :Md Taslim
      25-05-2020 17:10:00

    • interesting

      Commented by :amit maan
      25-05-2020 17:08:18

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Swati
      25-05-2020 17:04:32

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Neeta Kumari
      25-05-2020 17:03:02

    • Nice... But next season ke confusion create ho chuka hai

      Commented by :Chandra Mohan
      25-05-2020 17:01:43

    • Nice

      Commented by :Manish Sharma
      25-05-2020 17:00:33

    • Very Nice Story.. Waiting for next...??

      Commented by :Pawan Tiwari
      25-05-2020 16:56:32

    • Nice

      Commented by :Pramod kumar
      25-05-2020 16:53:26

    • Good story.

      Commented by :Sant Vijay Yadav
      25-05-2020 16:52:07

    • Right

      Commented by :Bikram
      25-05-2020 16:48:07

    • Bahut sunder kahani h

      Commented by :Shyam Shankar shukla
      25-05-2020 16:47:57

    • Interented Story Waiting next part

      Commented by :sunil sharma
      25-05-2020 16:44:36

    • Awesome story

      Commented by :Yogesh Srivastava
      25-05-2020 16:42:23

    • बहुत ही रोचक कहानी, waiting for next part.....

      Commented by :Umakant verma
      25-05-2020 16:41:47

    • Now it's going to more interesting very nice .

      Commented by :Kunal Chandra
      25-05-2020 16:33:17

    • Nice one

      Commented by :Rohit Deo
      25-05-2020 16:31:29

    • Nice

      Commented by :Priyanshu kumar Priyadarshi
      25-05-2020 16:25:07

    • Good story next part please

      Commented by :Chandan
      25-05-2020 16:24:42

    • soo much excited for next part

      Commented by :Usha Rai APE Hajipur
      25-05-2020 16:20:05

    • Excited for next part..

      Commented by :Sneha Bajpai
      25-05-2020 16:18:00

    • Nice good

      Commented by :Ravi shankar pandey
      25-05-2020 16:10:28

    • Good

      Commented by :Rahul
      25-05-2020 16:08:42

    • Really very interesting story and waiting next part.

      Commented by :Brijesh Patel
      25-05-2020 16:05:18

    • Very nice story.......waiting for next part

      Commented by :Vartika Mishra
      25-05-2020 16:02:24

    • Interesting

      Commented by :Raghvendra Singh
      25-05-2020 16:00:53

    • Interesting ..waiting for the next part

      Commented by :Abhishek Pandey .
      25-05-2020 16:00:40

    • Very nice story

      Commented by :Pintoo kumar
      25-05-2020 15:58:46

    • Interesting, waiting for next part.

      Commented by :Rajeev Kumar
      25-05-2020 15:58:36

    • Nice

      Commented by :Amrendra Kumar Singh
      25-05-2020 15:57:50

    • It's really very interesting

      Commented by :Shilpa
      25-05-2020 15:56:59

    • धारा प्रवाह युक्त कहानी

      Commented by :Vishal Rajak
      25-05-2020 15:55:44

    • Very good story

      Commented by :Govind lal
      25-05-2020 15:55:08

    • Nice story

      Commented by :Shivani
      25-05-2020 15:52:11

    • suspense hi suspense............... good

      Commented by :sweta
      25-05-2020 15:51:38

    • Interesting story...... waiting for next part

      Commented by :Dilip Singh
      25-05-2020 15:50:50

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