Away From Home…!

Medhaj news 28 May 20 , 08:01:04 Special Story Viewed : 490 Times
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Went Away from home with high hopes,

Never thought of being broke,

Feeling disheartened, Down with tone,

Away from Home, Away from Home.

Left alone with full of fear,

Red eyes filled with tears,

Saddened and feeling disowned,

Away from home, Away from Home.


Empty-handed and dreams are drowned,

Sore throat and feet are torn,

Walking alone by my own,

Away from Home, Away from Home.

Paths are hard and route is unknown,

Broken promises made me grown,

Alive with a wish to reach home,

Away from Home, Away from Home.



  -----Singh Barjinder Dhamija (SBD)------


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    • Heavy hearted..

      Commented by :Arun Sehgal
      06-06-2020 10:34:53

    • Very gud

      Commented by :Aditya Yadav
      06-06-2020 09:46:53

    • Great

      Commented by :Aatma Ram
      05-06-2020 23:33:06

    • Very nice

      Commented by :Deependra Yadav
      05-06-2020 22:59:38

    • Nice

      Commented by :Chandrpal Singh
      05-06-2020 22:50:39

    • Interesting lines.

      Commented by :Gaurav Singh, Haridwar, (Uttrakhand)
      05-06-2020 22:37:17

    • Great

      Commented by :Aslam
      05-06-2020 22:29:27

    • Great

      Commented by :Abhinash mishra
      05-06-2020 22:24:36

    • Great

      Commented by :Naresh Kumar Yadav
      01-06-2020 14:19:21

    • Nice

      Commented by :Jitendra Sharma
      31-05-2020 21:58:29

    • Really it's nice.

      Commented by :Gaurav Singh, Haridwar, (Uttrakhand)
      31-05-2020 20:34:19

    • Very gd

      Commented by :Merajul arfin
      31-05-2020 19:31:45

    • Very touching lines

      Commented by :Mani
      31-05-2020 17:50:08

    • Fabulous

      Commented by :Tajuddin Akhtar
      31-05-2020 17:39:01

    • Beautiful

      Commented by :Manoja Kumar Pradhan
      31-05-2020 15:14:06

    • Nice

      Commented by :Faish Uddin
      31-05-2020 12:58:11

    • Nice

      Commented by :Subrata Kumar mahato
      31-05-2020 12:57:17

    • Very good

      Commented by :Mohammad Ashhab Alam
      31-05-2020 12:51:31

    • Excellent

      Commented by :Nasir Hussain
      31-05-2020 12:12:22

    • Good

      Commented by :Vivek Gupta
      31-05-2020 12:05:02

    • Good

      Commented by :LAL KRISHNA LAL
      31-05-2020 11:38:08

    • Great

      Commented by :Chandan kumar Safi
      31-05-2020 11:34:43

    • Nice...

      Commented by :Ajeet Singh
      31-05-2020 11:31:09

    • Good

      Commented by :Aditya kumar
      30-05-2020 08:43:31

    • Today truth explaining in this poem....great thought

      Commented by :Mohit Kumar
      29-05-2020 13:34:22

    • Good

      Commented by :Pradeep Pandey
      29-05-2020 10:07:09

    • Nice

      Commented by :Shashank kesarwani
      29-05-2020 00:36:20

    • Paths are hard and route is unknown, Broken promises made me grown, Deep feelings

      Commented by :Tajuddin Akhtar
      28-05-2020 20:32:29

    • Fabulous poem

      Commented by :Tajuddin Akhtar
      28-05-2020 20:30:30

    • Home is like heaven

      Commented by :Nidhi Azad
      28-05-2020 18:58:41

    • Nice

      Commented by :Jeet
      28-05-2020 17:56:10

    • Our home is paradise

      Commented by :Santosh kumar
      28-05-2020 17:41:16

    • Superb

      Commented by :Naresh Kumar yadav
      28-05-2020 17:34:35

    • Nice

      Commented by :Rameez Raja
      28-05-2020 17:24:12

    • Away from Home Away from Home

      Commented by :Swati
      28-05-2020 16:29:15

    • Nice

      Commented by :Tanu Singh
      28-05-2020 16:19:42

    • Nice line

      Commented by :Mani
      28-05-2020 16:01:42

    • Very nice

      Commented by :Subrata Kumar mahato
      28-05-2020 15:53:25

    • Commented by :Nisha Mehta
      28-05-2020 15:25:40

    • Nice

      Commented by :Ayush singh
      28-05-2020 15:10:27

    • Nice

      Commented by :Nandan Kumar Gupta
      28-05-2020 15:00:43

    • Nice line

      Commented by :Mithun Kumar
      28-05-2020 15:00:26

    • Nice line

      Commented by :Raja Kumar Gupta
      28-05-2020 14:59:57

    • Nice

      Commented by :Amit Kumar
      28-05-2020 14:59:33

    • Nice

      Commented by :Prabhat Kumar
      28-05-2020 14:59:19

    • Nice

      Commented by :Mitthu
      28-05-2020 14:59:18

    • Nice

      Commented by :Ravi Roshan Paswan
      28-05-2020 14:58:56

    • Nice

      Commented by :sushant Jalaun
      28-05-2020 14:03:20

    • Nice line

      Commented by :Amit Kumar
      28-05-2020 14:00:17

    • Nice

      Commented by :suraj patel
      28-05-2020 14:00:03

    • Nice

      Commented by :Babita
      28-05-2020 13:57:26

    • Nice line

      Commented by :Rinku ansari
      28-05-2020 13:54:06

    • Grt line

      Commented by :Merajul arfin
      28-05-2020 13:09:30

    • Nice lines

      Commented by :RIZWAN KHAN
      28-05-2020 13:09:29

    • Nice poem..

      Commented by :Sneha Bajpai
      28-05-2020 13:06:40

    • Nice

      Commented by :Shailesh Kumar Gaund
      28-05-2020 12:45:36

    • Very nice keep writing

      Commented by : nice keep writing
      28-05-2020 12:30:50

    • Nice kavita

      Commented by :Shyam Shankar shukla
      28-05-2020 12:30:00

    • Very nice poem

      Commented by :Aslam
      28-05-2020 12:23:34

    • Very nice poem

      Commented by :Asl
      28-05-2020 12:23:11

    • Very very very good poem

      Commented by :Roshan Kumar Mahto
      28-05-2020 12:12:03

    • Very good poem.

      Commented by :Mahendra Singh
      28-05-2020 12:08:45

    • Poem full of Hope.

      Commented by :chandan kumar
      28-05-2020 12:01:48

    • Nice poem

      Commented by :Anjali
      28-05-2020 11:59:50

    • Nice poem, great job.

      Commented by :Priya Singh
      28-05-2020 11:47:36

    • Nice poem

      Commented by :Brijesh kumar
      28-05-2020 11:38:50

    • Nice poem

      Commented by :Brijesh kumar
      28-05-2020 11:38:13

    • Nice poem

      Commented by :Vijay Mehta
      28-05-2020 11:35:16

    • Great.

      Commented by :Harpreet Kaur
      28-05-2020 11:24:15

    • Good effort

      Commented by :Sirajuddin Ansari
      28-05-2020 11:19:24

    • Nice

      Commented by :Vinay kr
      28-05-2020 11:11:30

    • Nice poem

      Commented by :Ankit kumar
      28-05-2020 11:00:25

    • Nice

      Commented by :Arnab
      28-05-2020 10:59:17

    • Nice

      Commented by :Ajay Kumar
      28-05-2020 10:58:29

    • Nice poem

      Commented by :Anis Kumar Singh
      28-05-2020 10:51:51

    • Nice poem

      Commented by :Sanni singh
      28-05-2020 10:43:59

    • Nice lines

      Commented by :Vishwajeet Singh
      28-05-2020 10:41:20

    • Away from home

      Commented by :Vishal khandelwal
      28-05-2020 10:39:11

    • Nice lines

      Commented by :Brijesh Yadav
      28-05-2020 10:38:50

    • Ati Sundar Kavita.................

      Commented by :Ashok Kumar Seth
      28-05-2020 10:32:58

    • Away from Home Away from Home

      Commented by :Swati
      28-05-2020 10:32:00

    • Very nice line

      Commented by :Bheem nishad
      28-05-2020 10:28:56

    • Very true ,Super Lines....

      Commented by :Kalpana
      28-05-2020 10:28:36

    • Nice.

      Commented by :SiRaj Ahmad
      28-05-2020 10:27:34

    • Nice poem...

      Commented by :Anchalik
      28-05-2020 10:26:15

    • Wonderful...

      Commented by :BHAVNA TIWARI
      28-05-2020 10:25:09

    • Superb, relevant to current scenario.

      Commented by :Rajeev Kumar
      28-05-2020 10:25:07

    • Super

      Commented by :Prashant Kumar Trivedi
      28-05-2020 10:23:17

    • Very well described..

      Commented by :Harshita Srivastava
      28-05-2020 10:23:15

    • Good. Keep it up!!

      Commented by :Gaurav Kumar
      28-05-2020 10:21:47

    • Superb

      Commented by :Sasmita jena
      28-05-2020 10:18:18

    • Well explained the current scenario

      Commented by :Pragya Shukla
      28-05-2020 10:16:23

    • Nice

      Commented by :Tarandeep
      28-05-2020 10:15:48

    • Yes.. really hopes of peoples are being broken since last 40 days due to the current scenario.... starting of these days can be considered affordable but right now it is not....

      Commented by :Sarve
      28-05-2020 10:15:21

    • Superb...god bless u all

      Commented by :Well wisher
      28-05-2020 10:14:38

    • Rhyming of this poem is very beautiful.

      Commented by :Anil Kumar
      28-05-2020 10:12:55

    • Nice line..

      Commented by :Faish Uddin
      28-05-2020 10:11:57

    • nice

      Commented by :Rohit gautam
      28-05-2020 10:05:02

    • welldone

      Commented by :Vibha singh
      28-05-2020 10:02:36

    • Nice.....

      Commented by :Naresh Kumar Yadav
      28-05-2020 10:00:54

    • Bahut khub... Wel done

      Commented by :Vikas kumar ray
      28-05-2020 09:51:10

    • Good going'. Mr. Gautam

      Commented by :Avinash Deep
      28-05-2020 09:44:22

    • Nice

      Commented by :Sant Vijay Yadav
      28-05-2020 09:42:22

    • Nice

      Commented by :Akhilesh Kumar Singh
      28-05-2020 09:41:49

    • Nice

      Commented by :Priyanshu kumar Priyadarshi
      28-05-2020 09:37:56

    • Nice poem

      Commented by :Avinash Kumar
      28-05-2020 09:35:13

    • Nice

      Commented by :Priyatosh ranjan
      28-05-2020 09:33:34

    • Nice line

      Commented by :Bikkey singh Godda
      28-05-2020 09:18:21

    • Well written

      Commented by :Wasim Ahmad
      28-05-2020 09:14:59

    • Very nice

      Commented by :Brijesh Patel
      28-05-2020 09:14:14

    • Superb

      Commented by :Praveen kr. Jha
      28-05-2020 09:13:54

    • Nice poem.

      Commented by :Anjani Nandan
      28-05-2020 09:13:53

    • Nice

      Commented by :Akhilesh
      28-05-2020 09:12:51

    • Nice lines

      Commented by :Aditya Yadav Haridwar Uttarakhand
      28-05-2020 09:06:09

    • Nice

      Commented by :Sachin Srivastava
      28-05-2020 09:04:52

    • Nice lines

      Commented by :Manoj Singh,uttarakhand
      28-05-2020 09:04:11

    • nice poem

      Commented by :abhiyant kumar singh
      28-05-2020 09:02:28

    • Best poetry.

      Commented by :Vidya Verma
      28-05-2020 09:00:46

    • Bahut badhiya ,true line

      Commented by :Ashish Kumar
      28-05-2020 08:59:27

    • Nice poem

      Commented by :Bal Gangadhar Tilak
      28-05-2020 08:56:51

    • Nice

      Commented by :Bhamar Singh
      28-05-2020 08:56:17

    • Nice line

      Commented by :Akhilesh Mishra
      28-05-2020 08:56:15

    • Nice poem

      Commented by :Mithilesh Kumar Panda
      28-05-2020 08:55:41

    • Nice poem

      Commented by :Manoj Singh,uttarakhand
      28-05-2020 08:54:22

    • Nice

      Commented by :Pawan Tiwari
      28-05-2020 08:53:11

    • Nyc poem

      Commented by :Jagreeti
      28-05-2020 08:45:47

    • Lajawab

      Commented by :Dharmendra kumar
      28-05-2020 08:43:59

    • Nice poem...

      Commented by :Kamlesh Asrekar
      28-05-2020 08:40:45

    • Superb

      Commented by :Ajay Kumar Azad
      28-05-2020 08:38:53

    • Good

      Commented by :Zain
      28-05-2020 08:38:37

    • Good lines as always

      Commented by :Sangram Singh
      28-05-2020 08:38:07

    • Great

      Commented by :Vaibhav Raj Singh
      28-05-2020 08:37:17

    • Nice

      Commented by :Aslam
      28-05-2020 08:36:50

    • Superb...

      Commented by :Ramesh kumar
      28-05-2020 08:36:11

    • Fabulous..

      Commented by :Sameer Siddiquee Almora
      28-05-2020 08:33:48

    • Fantastic .......

      Commented by :Manoja Kumar Pradhan
      28-05-2020 08:30:35

    • Superb

      Commented by :Amod Kumar
      28-05-2020 08:29:06

    • Walking alone on my own.....rit say

      Commented by :Harendra Singh
      28-05-2020 08:26:46

    • Commented by :Ram kumar
      28-05-2020 08:26:03

    • Nicely expressed

      Commented by :Rohit Deo
      28-05-2020 08:23:49

    • Very good

      Commented by :Ajay kumar
      28-05-2020 08:21:59

    • Good news

      Commented by :Shivam Mishra
      28-05-2020 08:17:44

    • Good one

      Commented by :Mithilesh Kumar Singh
      28-05-2020 08:17:05

    • Very beautifully expressed

      Commented by :Bhawana Maurya
      28-05-2020 08:15:42

    • Wonderful dear

      Commented by :Chandan kumar Safi
      28-05-2020 08:15:37

    • Wonderful poem

      Commented by :Rajeev Ranjan Giri
      28-05-2020 08:14:21

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