कविता - ऐ जिंदगी तू कितनी खूबसूरत है (दया संग्रह)

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ये जिंदगी एक पहेली की तरह है, जो कई रंगो और पहलुओं से भरी हुई है। जीवन के ऐसे ही कुछ पहलू निम्नलिखित पंक्तियों में परिलक्षित हो रहे हैं-

ऐ जिंदगी तू कितनी खूबसूरत है,

जीवन के रंग कितने हैं दिये,

पर कुछ तेरी शर्तों, कुछ हमारी ज़िद ने,

हमने ही तुझे बदरंग कर दिया,

कितना सरल था जिन्दगी का रास्ता,


हमारे अहम और वहम से पड़ गया,

जीवन का कांटो से वास्ता,

देखो, सुनों, न बोलो ग़लत,

अहम या वहम कुछ भी पालो नहीं,


खूबसूरत जिंदगी का है ये सरल रास्ता,

जो आया है उसको जाना पड़ेगा,

समझ ले ऐ मन,  तुझे

जिन्दगी की शर्तों का वास्ता।


आपकी समीक्षाओं/ प्रतिक्रियाओं की अपेक्षा में--->



--(श्री दया प्रकाश पाठक)--


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      Commented by :Chander Shekhar
      13-07-2020 05:03:22

    • It's very beautiful poem....in lockdown really we all had felt the same as like yr poem....connect wali feeling hai ismain

      Commented by :Neelam
      09-07-2020 15:57:19

    • Bhut khub likha h aapne bhut badhiya

      Commented by :Kunal chandra
      02-07-2020 10:29:09

    • बहुत खूब लिखा है आपने बहुत बढ़िया

      Commented by :????? ?????
      02-07-2020 10:27:52

    • Very Nice

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      01-07-2020 23:21:52

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      01-07-2020 15:08:05

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      Commented by :Saloni
      01-07-2020 08:50:10

    • जी बहुत खूब लिखा है आपने

      Commented by :Bandana Shaw
      30-06-2020 11:15:34

    • Nice

      Commented by :Sandeep kumar yadav
      30-06-2020 10:41:00

    • बहुत खुबसूरत रचना है बास्तब में आदमी जीवन में अहम-वहम ना पाले तो जिंदगी की राह सुलभ ही सुलभ हैं, बधाई,.

      Commented by :?????? ?????? ??????? ???????, ?????
      30-06-2020 06:02:58

    • Bhut achi apni kalam ko ese hi chalate h

      Commented by :Somesh chandravanshi
      30-06-2020 05:23:27

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      30-06-2020 05:01:38

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      29-06-2020 22:04:24

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      29-06-2020 21:47:30

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      29-06-2020 21:33:55

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      29-06-2020 21:10:27

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      29-06-2020 20:40:39

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      29-06-2020 20:40:20

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      29-06-2020 20:28:01

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      29-06-2020 20:16:06

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      29-06-2020 19:56:49

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      29-06-2020 19:51:52

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      29-06-2020 19:46:33

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      29-06-2020 19:44:55

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      29-06-2020 19:36:05

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      29-06-2020 19:35:45

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      29-06-2020 19:31:10

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      29-06-2020 19:24:45

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      29-06-2020 19:15:22

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      29-06-2020 19:06:37

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      Commented by :????
      29-06-2020 19:05:02

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      29-06-2020 18:50:20

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      29-06-2020 18:45:10

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      Commented by :Sujit Kumar
      29-06-2020 18:40:42

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      29-06-2020 18:39:56

    • Good

      Commented by :Md Shahnawaz
      29-06-2020 18:37:06

    • Waah! Kya baat hai

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      29-06-2020 18:27:01

    • good..............................

      Commented by :Shristi
      29-06-2020 18:24:25

    • Nice poem

      Commented by :Santu Kumar Singh
      29-06-2020 18:20:32

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      Commented by :????
      29-06-2020 18:16:24

    • Nice poem

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      29-06-2020 18:15:39

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      29-06-2020 18:11:42

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      Commented by :Shinu
      29-06-2020 18:11:10

    • जीवन के यथार्थ को उकेरती भावपूर्ण कविता

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      29-06-2020 18:11:00

    • Good

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      29-06-2020 18:07:30

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      29-06-2020 18:07:28

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      29-06-2020 17:58:12

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      29-06-2020 17:58:05

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      29-06-2020 17:57:56

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      29-06-2020 17:57:19

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      29-06-2020 17:56:48

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      29-06-2020 17:56:46

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      Commented by :Rajnish Singh
      29-06-2020 17:55:11

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      29-06-2020 17:50:01

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      29-06-2020 17:47:42

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      29-06-2020 17:38:37

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      29-06-2020 17:38:21

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      29-06-2020 17:34:45

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      29-06-2020 17:34:26

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      29-06-2020 17:31:57

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      29-06-2020 17:31:44

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      29-06-2020 17:30:21

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      29-06-2020 17:29:48

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      29-06-2020 17:29:10

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      29-06-2020 17:21:54

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      29-06-2020 17:17:19

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      29-06-2020 17:16:56

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      29-06-2020 17:16:13

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      29-06-2020 17:15:57

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      29-06-2020 17:15:29

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